I believe what you typed was actually very reasonable. However, think on this, what if you typed a catchier post title? I am not saying your content isn't good, but suppose you added a headline to maybe grab a person's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda plain. You could glance at Yahoo's home page and note how they create post titles to grab people to click. You might add a video or a related picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it could make your posts a little bit more interesting.